I beleive that nobady can write a peom that they don't hav expirance in. the ensing is touching:)

Great piece, I think its evident that your poetry is still good, we all get into a slump. It feels like this really came from your heart, great work, keep it up. Thanks for the comment on mine. ~Zach

Written perfectly.
In perfect rthyme and words.
I luved it lots.

I can relate to this so much...i wounder if everyone ever feels like this at one point in there life or another it makes me wounder but i hate the feeling that i don't belong but im living on good job 5/5

Awwz very good but sad

This is a very well written poem and i feel like i can relate to alot of the parts, nice job 5/5

Hmmm.i liked it.But can't find the words to say it.It left me speechless.amd Awed.it reminded me of me and what i have become.and how sometimes i think about just saying goodbye.One last time.
~Jo Anna EL