Lost

by Caroline   Nov 25, 2007


Hate being torn apart

expecting the worst

fearing the dark

having a forbidden thirst

spacing out of reality

mixing with your dreams

no more sleep

unheard screams

looking for a path

overgrown and unseen

different from the rest

somewhere serene

crying when alone

smiling when surrounded

eyes become indifferent

life becomes bounded

heart is pounding

hands are shaking

nothing is wrong

but your smile is breaking

hands squeezed shut

look for a way out

lost in your head

cant find your route

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  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very well written, but I don't like the structure of the poem, perhaps having 4 lines put into 1 stanza would make it stronger. The flow was good, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Sometimes I just expect the worst outcome imaginable that way when it all falls apart it doesn't seem to hurt as bad because you knew it was coming. Amazing job as always 5/5 GG23

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really good poem. once i started reading i couldnt stop. the flow was perfect and the rhym was wonderful. An amazing poem. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Amazing poem! Its verses are short but very expressive i can relate to it very well....
    Anyways cool poem!!

    Nadia

    5/5

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