by Caroline Nov 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Hate being torn apart |
Very well written, but I don't like the structure of the poem, perhaps having 4 lines put into 1 stanza would make it stronger. The flow was good, keep up the good work. |
Sometimes I just expect the worst outcome imaginable that way when it all falls apart it doesn't seem to hurt as bad because you knew it was coming. Amazing job as always 5/5 GG23 |
by Kalee
This is a really good poem. once i started reading i couldnt stop. the flow was perfect and the rhym was wonderful. An amazing poem. 5/5 |
Amazing poem! Its verses are short but very expressive i can relate to it very well.... |