Amazing poem! Its verses are short but very expressive i can relate to it very well....
Anyways cool poem!!

Nadia

5/5

This is a really good poem. once i started reading i couldnt stop. the flow was perfect and the rhym was wonderful. An amazing poem. 5/5

Kalee

Sometimes I just expect the worst outcome imaginable that way when it all falls apart it doesn't seem to hurt as bad because you knew it was coming. Amazing job as always 5/5 GG23

Very well written, but I don't like the structure of the poem, perhaps having 4 lines put into 1 stanza would make it stronger. The flow was good, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe