Comments : Tell me you dont care

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    The flow was pretty good in this poem, I thought the 5th stanza was amazing and so true to say the least. As always you've done a fine job with the piece 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    This was VERY well done. There's a nice atmosphere, like in an "I dare you" tone, which I think is awesome. I love that kind of challenging attitude in a poem.
    I liked the rhyming and the flow was good. Word choice was nice.
    5/5.