Comments : The Lost Souls

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    I like how you have done a different rhyme style in this piece, most of your work (from what I've read) only has two rhyming lines. I like the aabb rhyme structure.

    Wonderful vibrant images displayed in this piece, really bring it to life in the readers mind.

    Really nicely written piece of work.

    ~Pete.