What a beautiful poem! I especially loved the phrase "Drinking in the madness, I hex those lips that lied." Very dark and poetic. I almost see this piece as being a song. Lovely poem!

I think these types of poems are where you really come to life and your talent really shines through.
This line really blew my socks off..
"I hex those lips that lied."

Such a wonderful flow to this piece, the lines and stanzas all just merge into one.

Wonderful poem.

~Pete.