This is really an amazing poem, so deep... its heart touching to all those who feel it

Hmm, that really makes you think, i like it alot.

Wonderful poem. I love a poem like this that makes you stop and really think. It allows you to use your imagination and apply the poem to a situation that suits you.. the situation can be different for every person. I loved the symbolism in this! it was so wonderful...such amazing word choice and flow! You truly did a fantastic job here! keep it up! your amazing! :D

A very dark, intense thought provoking poem, well written. 5/5

I love this poem!
So many great qualities i don't know where to start?! HAHA!

Well done!

Keep writing!

Danielle
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Great poem.