Comments : I look upon

  • 16 years ago

    by Leona

    Great job you really have talent

    Leona

  • 16 years ago

    by michael

    This is good work5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    I absolutely love this one..it's really great. It makes me feel soo much. Good work. <3 =] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    WOW thats deep 5/5 from me =)

  • 16 years ago

    by cody

    Cool story man

  • 16 years ago

    by Ms.Sweets

    It's like you stole the emotions, right out of my heart.
    This is a wonderful poem & I hope you publish, if you already haven't =\? You get a 5/5 from me :D great job! Keep stealing lines from my heart.

    ~Rebecca~

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Lovely expressions. Very fluid. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by mikaela

    Cool ... i wish im as deep as you are ... but im afraid id drown .. :) .... touches me.

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Amazing job! im speechless! :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Beverlyn

    Wow! what a beautiful piece, it's a sad one but very touching. Keep up the good job...5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by mikaela

    Aww.. this is sweet. ah bittersweet.. but sweet all the same.. love it.. and u post it on my birthday. haha..

  • 15 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I [[loved]] it...