by Brittany Nov 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Who cares what they gave us, |
by Sora
Very well written. loved the emotion you showed. |
by Lemma
I really like the edited version, the original was good but the second seemed more finished. The last stanza was definitely my favourite, it summarised the poem perfectly: |
I really like this poem! |
by Caroline
I loved it. i liked the flow and the emotion in it. amazing, and well written. |
I found the diction quite simple, but the whole poem, I just felt myself getting pulled in. Though I felt there could've been more imagery and metaphors/similes, it was truly a delightful read. The edit, it had me trying to sing it in my head. The first few stanzas, I find, though a cliche subject, you portrayed the idea well without coming straight out and saying what it's all about. Great read. |