I enjoyed this poem, especially its emotion. I can relate to that. And this is very well written too. A Bit distractive in some lines, but still an enjoyable read. Thanks to the last stanza that makes me give you 5/5!!!

I liked it, kinda short and something new. but it was good. i just broke up with my gf so yeah it kinda hit home with me. and i loved the way you put it into song mood. good job 5/5

I loved it!!! great job 5/5....plz look at sum of my poems!!! thx

I liked the poem part. Lol. I don't exactly know how to read songs in my head. But great job. Your flow was natural and was not off at all. The emotion was strong and your love and sadness was portrayed beautifully. Great job!
5.5

Amber..

I found the diction quite simple, but the whole poem, I just felt myself getting pulled in. Though I felt there could've been more imagery and metaphors/similes, it was truly a delightful read. The edit, it had me trying to sing it in my head. The first few stanzas, I find, though a cliche subject, you portrayed the idea well without coming straight out and saying what it's all about. Great read.
Nicely done, dear .
..__MiNDYY

I loved it. i liked the flow and the emotion in it. amazing, and well written.
5/5!

I really like this poem!
Great Job!
5/5

I really like the edited version, the original was good but the second seemed more finished. The last stanza was definitely my favourite, it summarised the poem perfectly:

"So who cares where we go now,
Because it's over and we had our fun,
Say goodbye to that one perfect day,
Say goodbye to me 'cause
Now we're done."

5/5

Em xXx

Very well written. loved the emotion you showed.