Even thought I'm not religious, this is still a really well written poem. Keep up the good work. I've loved everything I've read from you so far. 4/5

I'm not a Christian, but the message of your poem was very great!!!

He feels when we are hurt
He convicts whenever we sin
He thinks cause he has an intellect
He loves us from within

Especially that rhyme. Well written!!!

I am not Christian, but the poem was well written. Nice work. :)