Wow...
This is amazing, it deeply touched me cause I can relate to this great piece in so many ways. You wrote it excellently, with tones of deep darkness and fantastically created atmosphere. Your descriptions are very realistic yet so haunting. This is great dark poem from the beginning to the end.
Keep up!5/5 from me

Loved it. It got a tad confusing, but i reread it and think i got the meaning better the second time. Good job!
*ME*

Good piece, and I liked the way the demon you spoke of was actually your husband. By far, my favorite stanza was the second one, because of it's rhyme, flow and power. I especially liked the 'But what if that demon', not sure why, perhaps it adds a real innocent, or ghostly feel to it. I also loved what was actually being said in this stanza (if it was actually a demon, and not a man), the idea of everyone being able to see your demon.

Brad