Im Through! <3
by Christina Nov 25, 2007
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Its all done now. mine and your love. and after everything that happened i didnt think i was going to be ok. but im sitting here looking back on everything we had. and yes im hurt. and yes im in pain. but im going to be ok. i dont need a man to make me happy. ill find someone better and that will love me FOREVER! im not over you but that doesnt mean i'd go back to you. im done with your lies. and im done with you. i may love you forever but i will never tell you that again. dont try and make me go back to you because i wont, im better than that. you used to know what to say so i would fall back into your arms....well it doesnt work anymore. it will just make me hate you even more! |
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16 years agoby Not
"dont need a man to make me happy" girl thats right a lot of girls get confused on that.thinking that they have to have somebody believe it's not a must.you should make that into a quote because that line is so true!!.....=)
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16 years ago
by Christina
Thx!
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16 years ago
by Abu3li
Really nice one
with some modifications, it's gonna be awesome
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16 years ago
This is really good.. it kept my intrests. im sure there r many people who feel this exact way..im one of them lol.. but i liked this alot
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16 years ago
by Brittany
You need to use proper grammar and punctuation. It will make you poem a lot easier to read, and put a bit of structure to it, that helps readers understand your thought pattern and flow.
It would be brilliant if this was in stanzas, but it's not necessary.
Now to the actual poem.
It was very well done. I can totally relate to the situation you described. You admitted to past weakness which is admirable, but defended yourself and displayed a strength that had been hiding, just waiting to break the surface. The assertiveness is absolutely enpowering.
Keep it up!!
4/5.
