Castles burning

by craig   Nov 25, 2007


Dont let it get you down!
its need not do this too you, its in your head.
break the drought, brake your bone.
call me on the phone.
you know i think you need help the blue moon is falling,
another day gone by.
and daylights not catching your eye.
you need too come around!, theres a gutter over flowing dead rats sinking
you got me and everyone thinking how long you got till your through.
but dont let it get you down.
smile dont frown.
dont let it get you down.
A skinny whippet, a skip with a coffin in it,
a dinosaur looks just like you.
but dont let it get you down.
its only castles burning.
blind man singing a song, he sits in the station all day long
seeing what you dont.
i can see its getting you down.
please help yourself.
i dont want it too get you down
you know i cant bear the thought
too see your castles burning and
you stuck within them.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Thats interesting and I can understand why you feel that way... But sometimes people can't let go of those things....
    Anyways its a good poem very descriptive and imaginative.

    Nadia

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats very different and very good, keep it up xxxxxx