This is like a love song. It could be a great lyrics. But it's also great as a poem. Added to my favs!!!

The title sounded familiar, I love it. Then I also love the repetition of Give Me Tonight in the end of stanza. Very well done!!!

I love the repetition. I also really enjoy the format of it, and the way it reminds me of a song.
But I do have to say, some of the rhymes felt forced or something. Maybe it's just me, but the content is amazing.
5/5.

Excellent!

Realization of mistakes are absolutely have consequences in are life. This stuff truly made me realize about the things around me, the good and bad things that i did. Absolutely great piece. I enjoyed it!

Keep it up!

Wow how sweet.. i can see how u sincere all what u expressed in this poem nice one

Who ever you wrote this poem for is so lucky this poem is cute aww i love the last stanza ...great job!!...=)!

Gosh you write the most wonderful poems!!! this is so far my fave......that ive read so far keep it up!

<3 i love you silly

The person whom this poem was meant for is very lucky.

Now that that's out of my head: Pros and Cons.

Of course this maybe your style of writing and that this is just an opinion, your transition from stanza to stanza is lacking.

Otherthan that you've seem to master the rhythm and flow of poetry as well as rhyming.

Good Job

^Men^

This poem was very sweet
although i think it would sound way better without you starting lines with the word "That"
it bothered me a lot, i didnt think it sounded correct.
but other than that.
very good
5/5