The Smile Of A Brokenhearted Man

by FridusBlueheaven   Nov 26, 2007


Title : The Smile Of A Brokenhearted Man
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

The smile of a brokenhearted man,
Won't bring him little tears through his eyes
He'll show you happiness of heart in disguise
The feelings are untrue, all things are just lies
He's in different way, but soon she'll realize

The smile of a brokenhearted man,
Once more he smiled through the lonely night
Keep shining in his heart, it's a guiding light
And maybe that he's just too tired with his fight
He's been there to see stars, but he's out of sight

The smile of a brokenhearted man,
Simply deep but he's too tired of dreaming this
And seems he's too tired of saying those pleases
He's too tired of waiting a beautiful angel's kiss
But he always pretend he's living it all in a bliss

The smile of a brokenhearted man,
The smile that maybe you will never understand
He's been too tired of building those million plans
He even has no idea about a place he should stand
And he's too tired of dealing with the stupid chance

The smile of a brokenhearted man,
The sincere smile to see happiness through her day
A smile of happiness to see her finally found the way
So he's no longer need your heart there just to stay
And it's time for him to move on with life and go away

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great poem! but yet again, you have the problem of not carrying structure. stick to one type of structre throughout the whole poem. but otherwise the message within this poem was great and kept the reader wanting to read more and more. keep on writing! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    The Title was alright, but if you changed the title more people would be intersting in reading it. It was beautiful though. The flow was great, but at one point or another the rhyming seemed a little forced, but it was still great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Very sad, but very beautifyl.
    although for the title and some lines, it should be
    "The smile of a brokenhearted man"
    that is the correct grammer

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    The titled was very interesting,, as u know and i believe readers had also noticed the titled very interesting to read.. actually i can see that all the lines are expressed well.. the story was great and very meaningful 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I enjoyed this poem a lot because you added a little twist to it by having an extra line and its different than some of your other poems.

    Not my favorite and I lightly suggest merely glancing at your poem before you submit it because grammatical errors can take away from the beauty of your poem and your poems are very strong.

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