The tile is interesting, but I feel it's kinda sad in here. This is another your 5/5 job!!!

This is very sad and I can relate the emotion right there. This poem also brilliantly written. Gr8 job!!!

This was AMAZING.
I loved every single word of it.
There was so much emotion, and so much to think about, and absolutely gorgeous imagery.
Well done.
5/5.

I enjoyed this poem a lot because you added a little twist to it by having an extra line and its different than some of your other poems.

Not my favorite and I lightly suggest merely glancing at your poem before you submit it because grammatical errors can take away from the beauty of your poem and your poems are very strong.

The titled was very interesting,, as u know and i believe readers had also noticed the titled very interesting to read.. actually i can see that all the lines are expressed well.. the story was great and very meaningful 5/5

Very sad, but very beautifyl.
although for the title and some lines, it should be
"The smile of a brokenhearted man"
that is the correct grammer

5/5

The Title was alright, but if you changed the title more people would be intersting in reading it. It was beautiful though. The flow was great, but at one point or another the rhyming seemed a little forced, but it was still great 5/5

Great poem! but yet again, you have the problem of not carrying structure. stick to one type of structre throughout the whole poem. but otherwise the message within this poem was great and kept the reader wanting to read more and more. keep on writing! :]