Wonderful poem excellently written and expressed. i can feel what you go through. each and every verse. its like you force the reader to see it through your eyes the pain and we get a sneak inside your head. excellently written

Sometimes, i wonder why we learn to sink before we swim. find the meaning, dont let it drown.

I really enjoyed this poem. You know why. Because I could feel this poem was written straight from the heart. It just poured over the paper and filled it with so many emotions. This was expressed deeply and portrayed so much within each stanza. This was painful. Yet touching.

Well done a great poem which I have enjoyed reading. Keep up the good work. ~Mel

I really liked reading this poem, got into it so easily and it had so much rythm, i can feel ur emotion in it so much, i can tell this poem meant alot to u, well done xx 5/5

Oh my god, this poem was so sad. I can definately understand cause I was in a relationship somewhat like this, and u expressed the emotion really good. Great job! 5/5

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I am always totally honest in commenting so I have a few things that I don't like about this poem. This is just my opinion and I don't want to offend you if this piece emotionally means a lot to you but I think that it could be better.
Rhyming is so typical and it seems forced which left really negative impression on me. Whole poem contains amount of feelings but you could express them on more powerful way with some unique metaphors. Also your word choice could be better and more creative and than you could manage to express your self on more captivating way.
I really admire your writing in last stanza, I think that ending is fantastic but all in all nice work but it could use some improvements.

Oh wow that final stanza just blew me away. It was a perfect way to end your wonderful poem. The imagery in this one was just wonderful and truly effective in getting your message across here. The saddness expressed were emotions I could relate with therefore I was consumed from your first sentence.

Another poem with a great title that just caught my eye. Well done *5/5*