by FridusBlueheaven Nov 26, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Title : Save Me |
by Christina
Wow im speechlea....i dont know what to say...it was really good! keep it up!!!! another 5/5 |
by Not
Yes i feel you when i younger i felt like my life going no where but down i use to get so much trouble it was crazy but the type of person i was you would never believe it so i was living two different lives so i would pray for god to like please this can't be my life...another good poem.!!...=) |
by Sweet lig
A bit sad piece! but the emotion are totally awesome more this lines i can relate.... |
What a dark, heartfelt poem. I really felt your strain in this poem from your words. I feel like this poem would be best suited in the "sad" poems section though. |
by Brittany
I felt the desperation. Just the amount of emotion and committment was amazing. I wouldn't say the rhyming was flawless, but I liked this poem a lot. |