Save Me

by FridusBlueheaven   Nov 26, 2007


Title : Save Me
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Breathless and it feels like I'm running out of air
Life is empty and lately I found myself in despair
All alone like there will be no one to give me care
Lonely nights have gone, but then I'm still unaware

So helpless and seems I don't care about my fate
Lost in destiny and there's nothing to contemplate
Everybody told me that everyone has their soulmate
But I'm so afraid that I'm not, what if it's too late

Every time I close my eyes all I see is the pain
Sometimes I think that I have lived in the vain
There's a helpless soul inside that needs to restrain
Wish that will be the one to make it breathe again

Day after day and I see all good things come to end
I want to stand up but I don't think I have a backup plan
In the edge of confusion, that's where I used to stand
Wish I could have someone who could make me better man

God, please save me from this confusing situation
I'm tired that I should live it through the slow motion
I need someone who could fixes my helpless emotion
Send me your angel to show me the right direction

Wake me up from a dream, send me back to reality
I've had enough with this numb and this fragility
I'm really tired of dealing with the impossibility
Give me the one who'd be by my side for eternity

2007 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow im speechlea....i dont know what to say...it was really good! keep it up!!!! another 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    Yes i feel you when i younger i felt like my life going no where but down i use to get so much trouble it was crazy but the type of person i was you would never believe it so i was living two different lives so i would pray for god to like please this can't be my life...another good poem.!!...=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    A bit sad piece! but the emotion are totally awesome more this lines i can relate....

    God, please save me from this confusing situation
    I'm tired that I should live it through the slow motion
    I need someone who could fixes my helpless emotion
    Send me your angel to show me the right direction

    i like that lines because there are times i had the same feeilngs and same thoughts like that...

    impressive just keep on writing all what u feel 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    What a dark, heartfelt poem. I really felt your strain in this poem from your words. I feel like this poem would be best suited in the "sad" poems section though.

    Still, another very great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I felt the desperation. Just the amount of emotion and committment was amazing. I wouldn't say the rhyming was flawless, but I liked this poem a lot.
    5/5.