I really love your wordage and I have read several of your poems. All are excellent, You're officially added at my faves!!!

A very lovely peice, with beautiful and vivid imagery.
It was quite enjoyable and your penned it well..
Keep writting,
--Elly.

I agree, the imagery was amazing. I really like how you used the butterfly, and just got in touch with nature in the poem. It's absolutely beautiful.
5/5.

"And your beauty will always be saved in the afterglow"
^What an amazing line and fabulous way to finish this poem.

Although I did not like this poem as a whole as much as I have your other poems, I thought there were certain lines in this poem stronger than other poems altogether! you really have a way with description. 5/5

A lovely one! actually i really love butterfly seems they make colorful every single day of my life. i love the way how u starts ur poem. u made a great job for the whole stanza's.. 5/5

Perfect poem

Amazing. That's all I can say. This was amazing.
I loved it.

Another great poem altho theres a type i think in

Always together, I bet you're never be alone

i think you were tryen to i bet you'll nvr be alone....idk tho

keep it up!

<3 i love you silly

It was great as the words were so simple yet had so much meaning.

However like "Justsaygoodbye" said, you should really stick to one rhyme scheme as it may throw an unsuspected reader off.

But that may just be what you intentionally plan to do from the start.

After Thoughts:

After reading several of your poems, I've seen that you are a great writer and poet.

There are still parts you can improved on, but hey, everyone has there own style and there could never be a right way to writing poetry.

Good Job and Favorited as a Poet

Best Regards

^Men^

Simple words can sound so great when it is mixed by your talent of writing.. nice man! i noticed that in every poem.. the title becomes a part of every line in your poem.. like buckets of flowers and this.. anywayz nice poem man =]

I wish I could be the butterfly

"Butterfly, lately I wish I could be like you
You fly so free, you're colorful too"
Flows better^^

Butterfly, your wings shine like diamond stone
Always together, I bet you're never alone
Correct grammar^^

Butterfly, suddenly you're gone to another place
Soon you'll reach the high in the state of grace
Fly over the rainbow then you'll have everyone in daze
Your beauty shines, then and you everyone amazed
^^flows better, and correct grammar^

Butterfly, come and gone suddenly through the dawn
Back again and you bring the happiness all around
You bring sincerity through every person's heart
You show everyone that this life won't be too hard
^amazing^

Butterfly, soon you will find the right place to go
Beautiful place where love and happiness would grow
There will be a kindness of heart that you want to show
And your beauty will always be saved in the afterglow
^ correct grammar

amazing
5/5

I thought this was a greatly penned poem, the rhyming was definetly good, and the word choice was magnifique, it was simply beau, the flow was smoothe, and it was just breath taking

Stephanie Naylor

I loved the repitition that was definitly my favorite part. The poem was flawless. You truly have outdone yourself! The stanzas flowed elegently together. nice job
5/5
kaila

I love this poem! it is so beautiful. but the last line think could have been better and ended the poem on a more powerful note. I also think that throught the poem, you should keep the poem the same. sometimes you rhyme the first and second lines, and he third and fourth, other times the 1st, 2nd, 3rd and not the fourth and then other times all four lines rhyme. i think that this would make the piece even more powerful and easier to relate too. keep it up! :]

Beautiful poem..i liked it..but in the second line in this stanza....

"Butterfly, your wings shine like diamond stone
Always together, I bet you're never be alone
Morning time and you'll be ready for your roam
When it's dark, it's time for you to be back home"

"you're should be changed to "you'll"

but other than that great job.5/5