Awe. this is so sad. it almost made mehh cry. :[ another excellent poem. 5/5. |
by Red CSIII
It's absolutely beautiful; nature and love, |
by Brittany
This is a very relatable piece, and I absolutely love the whole behind the waterfall into to each stanza. It is beautiful, and it really gives such an innocent image. |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
Very nice poem! A true pleasure to read. |
by Sweet lig
Hmm what a mysterious waterfall! i love the style and how u described love from this... the flow i love it! its like a waterfall that falls all the sweet and real emotions from ur heart! great poem5/5 |
by Fsams
Your poem left a great impression on me. I like your poem coz it explains the story very well. GREAT WORK 5.5 TC |
KooL PoeM i LuV Da DeTaiL oF iT...KeeP uP Da GuD WorK...Don'T sToP uR PaSSioN @ N E CosT... |
All i can say is: this an ultra superb poem |
by Not
This is a wonderful,sweet and touching poem i love it so much even though the ending is sad.I still love it!..=) |
I love this poem!! It is so awesome!! Keep up the good work!! |
by jLegendc
Love in the waterfall huh? sounds exotic.. lol! |
This poem has no words to describe how beautiful and amzing it was. those words are understatements. |
by Hawaiizang3l
Aw, what a sad poem! beautifully written though, love the flow & the rhyming!! |
by Blissful
The imagery here was just flawlessly beautiful. I could picture everything clearly in my mind and the emotions were real deep. The last two lines were so powerful and held such meaning that they blew me away. Well done *5/5* |
Very good. although i think that this |
by JustKristina
This is another great write. I think that the second stanza, last line doesn't not fit at all. But that is the only thing that i would change about this. otherwise, it is a very good hearttouching poem! keep up the great work! :] |
by Michelle18
Aww... *tear* .. very sad ending... |