This poem is well written and keeps my mind going
it was well thought out by a very intelegent person as i am percieving through this wright
i rate this a 5/5
great poem

Wow this was sooo well written. your a really good writter keep it up. i give you a 5/5

Great poem i liked it

This is so beautiful.... Reading it has my eyes tearing up from the beauty of it. The imagery you used is just wonderful. The flow was absolutely flawless; and the rhyming was on key. I was captivated from the beginning to the end. The emotion of it just pulled me in. You are a fantastic writer. I am adding this poem to my favorites. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Letty

This poem is like a dream once you read it you live it...

I wish you all the best..
keep writing