This is really sweet poem. I love your work, it's 5/5!!!

Excellent poem. i really liked it.
it was sweet and beautiful. 5/5.

This is really sweet and touching. You're very good at giving your love flawless images.
5/5.

A lovely poem with beautiful and honest sentiment. I enjoyed reading this; however, I did notice that the rhyme scheme was off and sometimes that distracted me from the sweetness of the poem. Anyways, good job!

That is like that cutest poem...is it about the girl you love?

Wow this is an amazing poem.good job. :)

Forever I'll be the man who'd give you spirit of life
Protect your heart whenever you're in kindles strife
When it's dark, I'll be the one who'd give you light
When you got it wrong, I'll be the one to show what's right

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omg this is soooooo sweet :) 5.5

Hey
i've been going through most of your poems, and they really are all just amazing:)
5/5 keep up the awesome work:)
kayla xx

Aww, this was so beautiful.
It sounds like you really want that special someone by your side.
Great job!
5/5

*Cindy*

The love you epxressed in your beginning stanza was just beautiful. I loved how the emotions were real and just came to life. Just put a smile on my fave thank you. Well done *5/5*