Staring at the ocean
Sending you all my love
Upon a gentle breeze
Carrying me to you
All my fears you will ease

this is the poem of decade, just loved it so much, could see hope and love shining through every single word. so beautifully written, loved the idea of 'staring at the ocean' could feel so much. great write friend

all the best and take care

Filling me with your love
Your face I finally see

Cindy,

These lines I loved best. I too see his face, Cindy...24/7.
I think you made a wonderful Mochielle.

Love,

Ingrid

Simply breathtaking Cindy...

"Staring at the ocean
Sending you all my love
Upon a gentle breeze
Carrying me to you
All my fears you will ease"

Simple words that speak so much passion!!.. the elegance and grace was felt through out the whole piece!.. Loved it!!.. an absolute awesome job on quite a hard form!!

Tis a great poem cindy, never seen this style before but you did excellent at it, the flow tis perfect and i dont see any mistakes, i give it a 5/5!!! keep these styles coming!!!

Beautiful. That was picture perfect, literally. 5/5
These lines hit me most:
"Staring at the ocean
Sending you all my love
Upon a gentle breeze
Carrying me to you
All my fears you will ease"

Thats a fantasic piece cindy again very creative showing your poetry styles which i must say you present very well. a lovely poem brings brings the sweetest love into sight. xox sam

Such a beautiful piece I must say. The emotions which flowed nicely throughout this etched onto my heart and stayed there to even when i had finished reading this poem. The style is great you wrote is so amazingly and the meaning behind it captured my soul and put it into a daze. Such a gorgeous piece Cindy. I loved it. Well done. 5/5 ~Mel

Cindy, its such beautiful tranquil poem with vivid imagery.I visualise the ocean the gentle breeze, with loved one.Awesome poem :)

Love chavii.