This was such a beautiful piece of poetry Greenie. You worked the title into a gorgeous poem which captured my heart. Each line was filled with so much emotion. Written in such great depth. The word choice elegant and delicate. A flowing piece which I deeply enjoyed. ~Mel

This poem is beautiful, Great work
I really enjoyed reading this piece =]

The choice of wording is excellent, your a brilliant writter!

Wow....super poem. thw word choice is...wow...gorgeous. nice job

Wonderfully worded poem. Imagery vivid, yet subtle. I mostly liked it cuz the poem wasn't dramatized. Last stanza is superb.

This is amazing :)