by jason Nov 26, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
He called out her name drifting out of control |
That was beautiful, it was like watching a movie, you could see it happening |
by Gasttlee
That was great. The imagery, the power it really flowed and backed up what you were saying. 5/5 |
by Jackie
Excellent poem, lot of feeling and love in it, 5/5 |
by June
That was so powerfully written ,it brought a tear to my eye. |
by ibelievedhim
Wow! I can tell you put a lot of emotion into this. This is written really well and it flows so nicely. This actually reminds me of something that happened to a friend of mine. Thanks for sharing this, it helps me out. 5/5 :) Katie |