by Katelynn Nov 26, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Confusing voices creep through my mind i try to run from you but you are always there all this pain kept inside is leaking into my bloody stream |
by Rob Matt
Its really vivid and strong. i like it. the structure is kinda strange with relly long sentences and stuff, but if you make it a bit more edgy itll be a lot better. |