Bloody Tears

by Katelynn   Nov 26, 2007


Confusing voices creep through my mind i try to run from you but you are always there all this pain kept inside is leaking into my bloody stream

Bloody tears sweep through my face i try to run from it all but the pain remains the same i kept you inside of me i kept you beside me while i slowly loose all control of it

i love you but i hate you why cant you just leave me cus my body is dieing and the bloody tears are falling

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rob Matt

    Its really vivid and strong. i like it. the structure is kinda strange with relly long sentences and stuff, but if you make it a bit more edgy itll be a lot better.