I really like the flow here. great job!

PERFECTION...that's how i describe this poem. Very good write and read for me. Nice use of vocabulary too. 5/5

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Good, I liked it ^^ keep up the good work 5/5 ^.^

I like the idea behind this poem but i think it would read better if you put it in a different form or something... or made the lines a bit longer... i liked it though.5/5