A Bundle of Love (Collab)

by Italian Stallion   Nov 26, 2007


A light breeze awoke me from a gentle sleep.
Rubbing my fatigued eyes,
I saw a blurred object in the distance...
What could it be I vaguely asked myself?

While fixated on this distant object
And trying to remain awake,
A figure became exposed
Just before my very eyes.

The indistinct object soon came into view,
To my surprise it was not an object;
It was my one and only love, you.
Excited and astounded all in the same breath...

And compassion running with impatience,
My arms wide open with a smile so immense
Hugging and kissing, not wanting to let go;
For my affection intended for you is especially true.

In my arms holding you, my bundle of love,
Feeling nothing except pure bliss with love in your presence,
My state of mind is unclear; my heart beating fast.
Don't go yet, please stay here forever.

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion and Amber

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Collaboration with Amber

Amber: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=261132
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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    I loved this one as well! So well written every line was beautiful. I espicially loved this stanza
    And compassion running with impatience,
    My arms wide open with a smile so immense
    Hugging and kissing, not wanting to let go;
    For my affection intended for you is especially true.
    It was just so perfect. Your choice of words in this poem made everything so much more powerful.

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Awwww!So sweet!You write amazing love poems.I wish I could write poems about love that easily and smoothly.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was sp romatic in its own way. it was very expressing. the words u chose in this was perfect. once again great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is such a sweet poem, I really enjoyed this piece. You told a cute love story that held lots of emotion. I love this line in the fourth stanza;
    'And compassion running with impatience,'
    The combination of those two emotions just really stood out to me, I can't really express why, I guess I've felt it before and it touched me. :]
    I thought the flow was a bit rocky in parts, but it was mostly steady. I like that it didn't rhyme, I think this meant more without it. I also like how you linked the title in with the poem, it is sweet. The ending really wrapped it up for me and put a smile on my face. Excellent piece. :]

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    First off I just loved the title and it captured my attention! The detail you used here to create beautiful imagery just blew me away! I could feel your emotions, they were sincere and true.

    "And compassion running with impatience,
    My arms wide open with a smile so immense
    Hugging and kissing, not wanting to let go;
    For my affection intended for you is especially true. "
    ^fave stanza!

    Beautifully done.*5/5*

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