Very good! It was adorable. Made me smile. The emotions were very clear, the wording was great as per usual, the flow was pretty even through-out.. I think you two did a very good job on this. I really enjoyed the last stanza, very beautiful

First off I just loved the title and it captured my attention! The detail you used here to create beautiful imagery just blew me away! I could feel your emotions, they were sincere and true.

"And compassion running with impatience,
My arms wide open with a smile so immense
Hugging and kissing, not wanting to let go;
For my affection intended for you is especially true. "
^fave stanza!

Beautifully done.*5/5*

This is such a sweet poem, I really enjoyed this piece. You told a cute love story that held lots of emotion. I love this line in the fourth stanza;
'And compassion running with impatience,'
The combination of those two emotions just really stood out to me, I can't really express why, I guess I've felt it before and it touched me. :]
I thought the flow was a bit rocky in parts, but it was mostly steady. I like that it didn't rhyme, I think this meant more without it. I also like how you linked the title in with the poem, it is sweet. The ending really wrapped it up for me and put a smile on my face. Excellent piece. :]

Tammie

This poem was sp romatic in its own way. it was very expressing. the words u chose in this was perfect. once again great poem

Awwww!So sweet!You write amazing love poems.I wish I could write poems about love that easily and smoothly.5/5

<3Amber

I loved this one as well! So well written every line was beautiful. I espicially loved this stanza
And compassion running with impatience,
My arms wide open with a smile so immense
Hugging and kissing, not wanting to let go;
For my affection intended for you is especially true.
It was just so perfect. Your choice of words in this poem made everything so much more powerful.