I liked how the poem rymmed so well and it was a very nice poem very put together poem i liked it.SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

I love this piece, the oxymoronic title really grabs your attention at the start. It just reels you right in.

I really like how you gave every aspect of what is defined as "Paradise" a wicked twist. Shows just how silly our preconceptions on Utopia are.

This is a lovely write.

~Pete.