The girl you wish to be.

by BlueEyedMystery   Nov 27, 2007


She's the one who laughs when you cry,
She's the one who you wish would die.

She's talented, smart, and beautiful too,
With cherry lips, and eyes of blue.

She looks so happy with all her friends,
Walking around in the latest trends.

If only you could be that gorgeous girl,
You'd be the happiest person in the world.

But when the day is over and she goes home,
There's no one there, she's all alone.

Her dad's off on a business trip again,
Her mother left her when she was ten.

There's no one there to here her cries,
There's no one there to dry her eyes.

Are you sure you want to be that girl,
More than anything else in the world?

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Are you sure you want to be that girl,
    More than anything else in the world?
    good question
    this poem really explains that nothing is ever as it seems.
    i really anjoyed reading this.

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I really love this lol I bet you can come up with a stronger ending though ;) keep it up , thanks so much for taking time to read my poem.

    She's the one who laughs when you cry,
    She's the one who you wish would die.

    She's talented, smart, and beautiful too,
    With cherry lips, and eyes of blue.

    fav lines, the first made me laugh :)

  • 16 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Aaah!
    lol
    i like this poem!!! its really good!
    it all went together good, but yeah. so i liked it.
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The descriptions here were nice and I could imagine everything clearly in my head. It flowed nicely althought I do think the vocabulary was a bit simple. All in all good job!

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