The descriptions here were nice and I could imagine everything clearly in my head. It flowed nicely althought I do think the vocabulary was a bit simple. All in all good job!

Aaah!
lol
i like this poem!!! its really good!
it all went together good, but yeah. so i liked it.
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I really love this lol I bet you can come up with a stronger ending though ;) keep it up , thanks so much for taking time to read my poem.

She's the one who laughs when you cry,
She's the one who you wish would die.

She's talented, smart, and beautiful too,
With cherry lips, and eyes of blue.

fav lines, the first made me laugh :)

Are you sure you want to be that girl,
More than anything else in the world?
good question
this poem really explains that nothing is ever as it seems.
i really anjoyed reading this.