One of my favorites from you. It was truly phenomenal. Your pieces never seem to amaze. The only line in this I think sounded a little forced in rhyme to me was

Or saying hello to a Devil that grinned.

I don't know why but it just struck me as an odd way to put it, like it had to be arranged just so. ? I don't know lol just offering a suggestion. We can all get a little tired of the constant praise and just crave an actual comment that really looks at our poem and tries to help us grow as poets, though I'm no expert really. So, lol, I hope this helps and I hope you know that whether or not you take this suggestion, I LOVE this piece!
*ME*

Good poem dear. you have a wonderful flow through out it. i enjoyed your use of crocidile tears ;-)