What I think Love is

by needsxanxescape   Nov 27, 2007


-My heart has been ripped into two
I thought it could be fixed by you,
my thought on this thing called love
is that it is not from way up above,

-Everyone says that love is magical
and you will find someone so special,
It is all lies i say, none of it can be real
I know, i promise that it is all so unreal,

-Everyone says I'll find love somewhere
I will not and it will only lead to despair,
I think love is fake, that it's just a game
you'll lose,whats left, someone to blame,

-you'll find someone he'll make you feel high
you'll never touch the ground, you'll just fly,
It's lies, I'm cynical, only 16, and I hate life
what happed to me, must of cut like a knife,

-They say you' know he loves you, he'd die
had he ever made you want to or made you cry,
You think he loves you, then he's up and gone
i promise you'll never want to see the next dawn,

-I hate people in general, that makes it worse
all i can say is that i think love is just a curse,
thats it,, but i want someone that can change it
I might never know have real love, if it's real.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxxclarizaxxx

    That was so good
    did that really happen to you in real life?
    xxSHITxxHAPPENSxxRIGHTxx

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I have learned to hate even the lightest of a touch,

    that line was well put. i think it would be good to do a syllable count and that would improve the flow a little bit. I really think that would help your piece because it's already soo good that it just needs that litte bit of tweaking.
    *ME*