I have learned to hate even the lightest of a touch,

that line was well put. i think it would be good to do a syllable count and that would improve the flow a little bit. I really think that would help your piece because it's already soo good that it just needs that litte bit of tweaking.
*ME*

That was so good
did that really happen to you in real life?
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