by Mr Rhee Nov 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Sometimes I wonder what would |
This was okay. But I do suppose it could be better. You repeated a lot; when there was no need for it. Which, I didn't particularly care for. Also, it could of flown a bit better. |
by kate
I agree with Kaylee. |
by Kaylee
This poem is very interesting in a good way. It was very powerful. It made me feel a few different things. Fantastic job! |