Hopeless

by sarah   Nov 27, 2007


H- Hung over again, like I was yesterday
O- Often wondering why I do this to myself
P- Perhaps I am supposed to be this way?
E- Energetic people rush through the streets
L- Leaving me helpless, abandoned and cold
E- Except for my bottle of rum, it keeps me safe. I
S- Sip it slowly to keep me warm, while I
S- Silently die inside.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    Very nicely done...I've never attempted writing in this style before. The message is a strong one, and nothing feels forced. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by matt

    I love it! it's got some deep thought. your a great writer. keep up the good work sarah!