This is really good. the repeating of the word 'calma' is very effective. and i agree with empty space. it seems like this shoould be a song.
preferable a screamo/pop song.

and thank you for your comments on my poems.
i appreciate it :)

Woow... Empty Space told me about you and I am very impressed. Good technique and I love the repetition of certain verses. It really is beautiful! What I think would be interesting is adding a bit of raw emotion into this poem... but thats just an idea :) anyhow i really love your work and I look forward to seeing more of your poems!
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This poem is amazing :)

Once again very good! And this one alludes to Darkshines! I like how you can incorporate Muse into it..and still make it entirely your own, with different meanings...possible like a prequel to the song. This is very good, looking at it as a separate entity...good job!