by Jenni Marie Nov 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Trying to sway me with your false desires |
by Mr Rhee
Very nicely done. I probably could never do this as well. I see it may have been a little difficult in the last stanza, but you came up with a great finish. I wish I had your talent. |
by pixie
Really wow.... |
by pixie
Really wow.... |
by Sarah
Wow, I love it! |
by Kaila
I absolutly loved this poem. The flow was fantastic. The poem really had rhythmatic beat that had me tapping my foot. I really couldn't think of anything to critique on this poem I've been re-reading it trying to think because I hate leaving a poem uncritiqued but I just loved it. Nice work |