Liar Liar (Licentia Rhyme)

by Jenni Marie   Nov 27, 2007


Trying to sway me with your false desires
Each time you talk my mind chants liar liar
Gazing into your eyes fills me with disdain
Lie after lie, I'm wondering if you're sane
Uttering so many lies with a straight face
Leaving me repulsed, feeling only distaste
Yet you continue, smiling that perfect smile
Deceit hidden, but baby you're full of guile
Knowing just what is hidden behind your eyes
Sweetheart I've known so long about all your lies
Trying to sway me with your false desires
Each time you talk my mind chants liar liar

Gazing into your eyes fills me with disdain
Lie after lie, I'm wondering if you're sane
It's time to grow up, finally be a man
I know it's difficult, but prove that you can
Start telling the truth, it's really not that hard
Otherwise, it is your heart that I'll discard
Why do you insist on weaving these stories
Watching you stand there in all your false glory
What happened to the truthful soul I once knew?
Used to love you, now you always leave me blue
Trying to sway me with your false desires
Each time you talk my mind chants liar liar

Uttering so many lies with a straight face
Leaving me repulsed, feeling only distaste
It's like you get of on causing so much hurt
Deliberately doing wrong, it's like I'm dirt
Heart breaking a little more each single day
Used to be kind, now you always want your way
Countless times I've sat alone, constantly cried
Your {honest} eyes hide all the evil inside
Intimate moments gone, heartbreak all that's left
Used to trust, now all I do is second guess
Trying to sway me with your false desires
Each time you talk my mind chants liar liar

**For A Contest**

Licentia Rhyme-Consists of at least three 12 lined stanza's, with 11 syllables per line. Rhyme scheme is AAbbccddeeAA BBffgghhiiAA CCjjkkllmmAA
Capital letters representing repeated lines.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Very nicely done. I probably could never do this as well. I see it may have been a little difficult in the last stanza, but you came up with a great finish. I wish I had your talent.

  • 16 years ago

    by pixie

    Really wow....
    Great!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by pixie

    Really wow....
    Great!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow, I love it!

    Its amazing. 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I absolutly loved this poem. The flow was fantastic. The poem really had rhythmatic beat that had me tapping my foot. I really couldn't think of anything to critique on this poem I've been re-reading it trying to think because I hate leaving a poem uncritiqued but I just loved it. Nice work

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