And when you realize I've gone
I'd kill to see expression on your face

Ohhh that ending was so vindicitive and hurtful. I loved it! This poem was honestly really great Jenni. For a love poem it's quite different. Lately i've been reading alot of love poems which are either happy or depressive. This was original because it held so much anger within it. Almost portraying deep sarcasm within a few lines and I always love sarcasm. Your word choice was effective, simple and so flowing. You wrote this for a contest? well I hope you get the gold because this was great. Well done on creating another superb poem!

~Mel

Another beautiful poem. I feel weird commenting you because these are so fantastic, there's nothing bad to say. I feel like a fan girl or something. ^^ 5/5