This has good flow. ^^ I love guys who treat their girls like a princess.

You're the one who broke it into pieces
With all of your stupid lies and games
All those times you humiliated me
Countless times you caused me pain
Again and again

how i thought it would sound better and it wouldnt subtract from quality just mess the scheme up a little buti think it would be just fine having 5 lines in that part
5/5 it was really good