by neo
I feel your pain with every word. its called distorted body image. i will never be good enough. cause of this poem, u are on my fav list |
It's almost scary how much I feel myself within this poem and i love how simple and emotive it is. It's a sad topic and it's not nice to feel that way. x |
by Christina
Awwz another rele sad one....u shouldnt feel that way! cuz i bet it aint true... :-) |
by Teria
Hmm. nonrhyme, which I like a lot. Your poems are so pointblank. Why not use something other than your actual feelings to express? Like, explain dead grass or dying roses, or wilted trees. maybe even a lost puppy dog once in awhile. It makes it easier to relate to. |