I liked it...
But its kinda like Scary in away.. lol
But Oh Well..
Great Job.. =]]

I liked it. it was cool.

thanks for the comment ^.^

I really like this! I must say wow, you wrote it greatly, short but so compact. I like your ideas for poems, very original and emotional.

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I am nothing yet I am something, gods unwanted child
I sit on his left and wile others sit on the right,
People walk in my shoes, and canâ??t take it after a mile-
^This lines are totally fascinating.
Well done, you should be proud on your self.

U got good way to write in 5 minutes or less. Yeah, it's kinda scary but it more hope as last to like this. U r amazing, don't u kno dat? Lol.

This poem doesnt suck!! its really good!! i like it!!

Don't worry this soo doesn't suck, it's really good, and the imagery is awesome good job
ali x

Hii

thanx for commenting

all mine suck

cuz i havent put my new ones upp

so how are you???

Keep reading, you're doing very well. :-)

"people walk in my shoes, and can't take it after a mile."
that line is so true. this poem hit me because I think at different point in our lives we all feel ike "God's unwanted child." which is true this poem is absolutly amazing i loved it... and you said you can't write poetry well. Good luck on the book
Ainsley...<3

I like it. though you may want to edit it. you've got some symbols in there you...shouldn't. I especially liked the last two lines. Great poem here.

Thanks for the comment.
Happy writing
Hannah-

This poem is creative. I like how it comes together..it is very good.

Good poem!!!!!

Pretty good poem Derrick. Ya ok maybe it sucked a lil bt it wz a good poem even iof written in 5 min. (jst da truth)

It was pretty good for only written in 5 minutes.

This poem is amzeing i love it.