My Life Needs to end

I felt like, you pourred you heart out. But I think that you can become even better as a poet, if you use metaphores. I admit that i don't always use them, but most of the time I do.

I relate to this, im trying to find something good to hold onto,
i luv this poem it shows great emotion and is deep, it really gets the point across you are trying to say
keep up the good work and dont worry life has to get better it cant always be painful
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