by EMMAlouise Nov 27, 2007
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Love, romance /
i love you
Im the mist on your windows, |
It is totally extrmely effective! You're so good, those each stanza are killing it! Strong words making it GOOD!!!! |
by Empty Space
I agree, very strong words and extremely effective. Exellent! |
Wow, this is so powerful! I love it! Whole poem is excellently written and so original. Great piece from the beginning to the end, with so effective descriptions. I like your choice of words and the atmosphere that you created. |