Honeyville

by RainbowSlider   Nov 27, 2007


Is this your first time in Honeyville?
Folks here like the sound of it still.
They all think it a real sweet place.
They all have a smile on their face.
Some of the smiles are painted on.
Can tell the ones that have real fun.
Some folks come here and to stay.
Why is it that you came here day?
Are you a traveler needing a rest?
Always room here for a new guest.
Smile; this is no where to be blue.
People always saying, "I love you."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    It feels like some of the words in the sentences are missing. Overall, a really nice piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    I like this one, but why is it in the dark/fantasy category? I thought it would be more of a cheerful poem?
    - 5 / 5 -
    Nicole xx