It was beautiful but so sad the emotion was so strong. but i assure you if you need someone to talk to i'll be right here. you have talent.

"No matter how suffering you put me through"

i think you meant

No matter how much suffering you put me through
5/5 though because i realate to this in every way and its strong in emotions and it had a nice flow+rhyme with it

Well you're certainly not stupid or you wouldn't be able to write such a great poem! and trust me, we're all a little crazy, love does crazy things. i feel the exact same way at the moment ironic that i read this!

I like the structure you used, it fit the poem really well. I also like the repitition and how you made it rhyme without sounding forced. I didn't like the last line of each stanza, it didnt fit the flow right (unless you used a structure that required it) and I'd suggest making some minor changes. Other than that, I really liked it. Nice work. :)

Wow, this poem was just great. I love the feeling from this and the flow fit just perfect. Except, in the second stanza, I think you had a mistake. In this line:

"No matter how suffering you put me through"

I think it's supposed to be this:

"No matter how much suffering you put me through"

Other than that, the whole poem was just amazing. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

I loved the emotions and the power in each line. The mood was deep and haunting. There were some mistakes here and there but other then that it was great. Well done *5/5*

This is so true, and touching... you can really feel the internal struggle, i really enjoyed this... 5/5

Dang, that was DEEEPPPPP!!!! I really like this a whole lot and it's a very true poem. I can agree on all levels of this. My only question is what do you do when you are ready to come out of hiding and will we ever be the same. Awesome job, you should write a book.