Interesting poem is any of it true??? |
by Fsams
This poem is so touching and I LOVE the way you have written it. Just change her to he in the last line :) |
Very touching deep and it has alot of meaning behind all the things that make a good poems |
by Robert
Beleive it or not I really liked this piece. I agree it was abit raw but thier was a story there and the reader had no choice but to be wrapped in the story good job now this poem you are on your way to being a very good writer |
by Danielle
I love it once again. especially the term crimson sea. |