Interesting poem is any of it true???

well anyways the flow of the poem was great....keep up the good work 5/5

This poem is so touching and I LOVE the way you have written it. Just change her to he in the last line :)

Very touching deep and it has alot of meaning behind all the things that make a good poems

Beleive it or not I really liked this piece. I agree it was abit raw but thier was a story there and the reader had no choice but to be wrapped in the story good job now this poem you are on your way to being a very good writer

I love it once again. especially the term crimson sea.

I would love to read more.

keep it up!

def. a 5/5