Mr.Doodle

You ripped out my heart
you through it way
you laughed in my face
when i told you my pain
i cryed some tears,
face some fears
now all i hear
is the lies that you told
and the place
where your name was engraved in my heart
is a hollow place
for the pain.

please comment on this one, i came up with it off the top of my head and i'd really like to know what you think. THANX :-)